Teach Me - Lucy Tregidon (New original song!)

I wrote this the other day and want to get some feedback on it. I'm going to record it and put it on YouTube at some point but I seem to be so busy at the moment so thought I'd put the lyrics up here to see what you guys think. As soon as it's on YouTube I'll add a link to the bottom of this post so if you like the lyrics, please listen to it! :)

We met on a Tuesday,

And you said hey,

In your own little way,

I thought it’d be nice,

If I smile,

And you keep it for a while,

Keep it for a while,

And I’ll just say, I’ll just say,

Teach me to love,

Show me you care,

Tell me, that I’m the one,

And there’s no one,

Who can beat me there,

Teach me to see,

All that I can be,

In the end, it’s all pretend,

And no one really cares,

There we are in the moonlight,

I said alright,

I’ll dance if I have to,

You say, you say,

Teach me to love,

Show me you care,

Tell me, that I’m the one,

And there’s no one,

Who can beat me there,

Teach me to see,

All that I can be,

In the end, it’s all pretend,

And no one really cares,

No one really cares,

Teach me to love,

Show me you care,

Tell me, that I’m the one,

Teach me to love,

Show me you care,

Tell me, that I’m the one,

And there’s no one,

Who can beat me there,

Teach me to see,

All that I can be,

In the end, it’s all pretend,

And no one really cares.

My YouTube channel : www.youtube.com/lucytregidon